The table below shows the average annual income per person(in united states dollars) in 8 countries in 2008 and2013.
It also shows the percentage growth or increase in income between these two dates.
Overall, five countries experienced an increase in income growth(Australia, Belgium, Luxembourg and Poland.)
Three countries saw a reduction in their population’s income per person.
It is noteworthy that the most considerable growth was in Luxemburg.
Also, very reliable consequence had
Belgium and Poland.
The most significant decline was in grace there was -13percen increase, also largest increase was seen in Belgium, albeit not as great as Luxemburg.
The Netherlands was the only country that registered the same number of inhabitants in 2008 and 2013.
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Hey Tsitisia, here are some tips for you.
1. Don’t copy the rubric word for word in your introduction.
2. Don’t put all of the sentences in a separate paragraph.
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Good attempt Tsitsia. The overview is good- just make sure to put it in one paragraph.
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Simply you have copied the whole rubric which you will lose mark for this. It is the must that you have to paraphrase the rubric by using synonym. However it was good to try.
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Very good point Sokkkhim.
I would like to help you more, and I think this is the right way to improve our writing skills
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