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People from european countries had their average annual income compared in 2008 and 2013 and also the percentage of difference observed between these years. This informations were given in american dollars.
Overall, only one country presented less than 20,000US$ on average annual income in 2008, Poland. Luxembourg had more money in 2008 and also in 2013. Although, Poland showed the worth data in 2008, the greek had the worth growth, and in 2013 they received less money than all the other european countries.
The average annual income from eight nations were evaluated and only half of them had their income increased (Austria, Belgium, Luxembourg and Poland) by 13%, 15%, 17% and 22%, respectively.
In three countries occured a decrease in the amount of money won by their inhabitants (Greece, Italy and United Kingdon). Although the british were less affected than the greek, which presented the peek of the money loss, they loose 4% of their income while the greek loose 13%. Italian people almost reached the greek and their income decreased 12%.
The table shows that only one country remains with the same ammount of money, Netherlands.

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  1. Hey Rafaella, ????
    + Nice intro
    + Good dividing your answer into paragraphs based on income changes. However, try to include more than one sentence in each paragraph
    + Some good vocabulary
    – Try to give a general description of all of the categories in your overview; you have focused on Poland, Luxembourg and Greece. 
    – Remember to capitalise countries: E.g. “European countries”
    – Be careful with spelling: worth vs. worst, peak, amount, 
    – Be careful with countable and uncountable nouns: “information” is uncountable.

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