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Kumiyo

I am talking about an outdoor sport I would like to try for the first time.
I want to try surfing in Australia one day. I remember when I went to Bondi beach in Sydney in 2015, there were a lot of surfers who enjoyed catching a wave. Simply I thought it was cool!
At that time, I just watched and didn’t try to surf because I wasn’t able to swim at all. This experience motivated me to practice swimming. Since I was back to Japan, I’ve started learnt swimming at a local swimming school once a week as well as I would enjoy snowboarding in every winter which is good to improve the balance.
I think I will visit to Australia the end of this year, and I will try to surf for sure.

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