The table gives the out-put of the research on the amount of people who consumed soft drinks on daily basis for a period of over a week, in 2019, in the 4 states in the UK : England, Scotland, Wales, Northern Ireland.
Overall, the respondents of the Scotland who completed the survey registered that they had been on the top of the list(at 51%) as far as drinks consumption was concerned. In second place was Wales (at 45%). England and Northern Ireland followed behind: 40% and 39% respectively.
In Scotland, Irn Bru had been the top most prioritized drink by the citizens( at 23%) whereas Sprite had been the least demanded product ( at 4%). Coca- Cola, Pepsi, and Fanta were consumed at 11%, 7%, and 6% respectively.
The citizens of Wales had reported the most popular drink, Coca-Cola ( at 20%). Fanta had been their least favourite drink( at 5%). Pepsi was shown in the second place, according to their registered data ( at 8 %). Sprite and Irn-Bru had been popular equally (at 6% each).
In England, Pepsi (at 8%) was as half popular as Coca-Cola (at 16%). Fanta(at 7%) had been less than half as preferred as Coca-Cola (at 16%). Sprite was in the fourth place (at 5%) whereas Irn-Bru was at the bottom of the list ( at 4%).
Among the people of Northern Ireland, Coca-Cola was as popular (at 16%) as three-fold of Fanta ( at 6%). Sprite is registered in the second place (at 7%). After Fanta, being in the third place, Pepsi and Irn-Bru had been followed behind at 5% and 3% respectively.
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Nice report Shehla ????
+ Good brief introduction
+ Your overview is good. However, you could improve it by mentioning the popularity of soft drinks. For example, that Coca-Cola is the most popular soft drink in all of the countries except for Scotland.
+ Some very nice vocabulary: “half as popular as”, “respectively”, “whereas”, “were consumed”, “the citizens of Wales”
– The UK doesn’t have “states” just four different countries.
– You sometimes confuse the past perfect and past simple. For example, most sentences should be in the past simple (not past perfect): “Pepsi and Irn-Bru had been followed behind at 5% and 3% respectively.”- it should be “Pepsi and Irn bru followed behind at 5% and 3% respectively”.
– Can you group the countries into paragraphs (rather than having a separate paragraph for each country)?
Ok sir Thanks .
I will try not repeat this.