The pie chart illustrates the percentage of satisfaction of visitors of the Edinburgh Zoo, reported in two surveys conducted before and after introducing two pandas.
Overall, the number of visitors increased with the addition of the new pandas from the previous records. While the number proportion of visitors reported very satisfied inclined in the later survey, the percentage of visitors who were very disappointed decreased. However, the satisfied group of visitors remained stable during the two surveys.
From the chart, the improvement in the very satisfied group in the year after getting the pandas to the museum is noted from 10% to 35%. The proportion who were satisfied and did not respond in both the period stayed the same at 40% and 5% respectively.
On the contrary, there was a decline of 20 % in those who reported that they were dissatisfied in the later year than the initial survey at 35%. Similarly, there was 10% of the visitors were very dissatisfied before the arrival of pandas, which reduced to 5% thereafter.
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