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Secondary schools need to examine teenagers from time to time to make them prepared for the challenges they will face after school life. I would argue, teenagers do need to be examined regularly in order to do well in their future.

Firstly, studying for exam compels teenagers to retain all the knowledge about the subject in their mind, irrespective of their personal liking and disliking. They study seriously and revise thoroughly for a brilliant success in their exams. For example, a student of science would study hard to pass his exams and become a doctor, but it is not the end yet. To become a practical doctor, he needs to hone his skills. For that purpose, he has to be devoted and dedicated to all his studies before entering medicines. His appearance in examination on regular bases would assist him with his pre-required concepts and knowledge for the chosen field. He would learn all the basic chemistry and biology through his tests and evaluations, before stepping his leg in his future career. If he does not sit in exams and prepares for tests in secondary school, he will not be able to study fruitfully at the higher level.

Secondly, regular exams help adolescents to stay pro-active and keep in touch with their courses. If they do not have exams from time to time, they will get lethargic towards their studies. For example, in semester systems, teenagers always put their untiring efforts for finding their destinies and achieving their goals. They leave no stone unturned as they have test after test in limited time. So, they actively study and prepare for post-school life . Eventually, they pass brilliantly and successfully. However, in annual systems, they get off the track. Having plenty of time, they usually get bore and sit back, waiting for the exam. That way, they miss an ample of learning opportunities, resulting in stress and chaos.

According to some people, regular exams hold back teenagers from entertainment. Taking regular exams make their lives challenging and monotonous. They hardly have any leisure to enjoy. However, they never think of the unending prosperity and comfort brought by their consistent efforts for passing exams.

In conclusion, teenagers’ appearance in regular exams do prepare them for their future after schooling. It helps them to keep their knowledge safe in their mind, and they study actively to stay in touch with their courses for the future.

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  1. Admin May 10, 2021

    Very nice Shehla, your best essay yet!
    + The introduction is good. However, make sure that your position is directly related to the question you are being asked: you say “I would argue, teenagers do need to be examined regularly in order to do well in their future.” However, the question is asking you whether “regular exams prepare teenagers for life after leaving school”. Perhaps, a better position would be “I would argue, frequent exams at high school do prepare teenagers for post-school life”. 
    + Well developed body paragraph 1. 
    + Lots of very good vocabulary
    + Lots of good grammar structures- good to see you getting the hang of conditionals.
    + Good attempt at a rebuttal. Make this clearer. For example, “However, I would argue that this view is short-sighted. Focusing on the long term, doing regular exams and the resulting increased future possibilities can lead to unending prosperity and comfort later in their lives.”
    – Try to avoid general statements. Here are some examples,
    1. “They study seriously and revise thoroughly for a brilliant success in their exams.” – not all students study seriously and revise thoroughly. You could change it to “Exam pressure incentivises many students to study seriously and revise thoroughly”. 
    2. “If they do not have exams from time to time, they will get lethargic towards their studies.” (use “may” instead of “will”)
    3. “For example, in semester systems, teenagers always put their untiring efforts for finding their destinies and achieving their goals.” (use “often” instead of “always”)
    4. “Eventually, they pass brilliantly and successfully.” – not all students pass. 
    – Be careful with spelling: “bore” = bored
    – It is not clear why annual exams result in “stress and chaos”.

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