1. Im a registered nurse by profession. I have been working in the coronary care unit for 5 years. I basically render therapeutic nursing care to a critically ill cardiac patient and educate the patient and their families on how to become fully independent with their health needs.
2. Well, I like the fact that I have achieved my dream to work in the Coronary Care Unit. My colleagues in our unit are very supportive with one another despite the day to day stress that we have been through, at the end of the day, our Headnurse is always appreciative and grateful for all our efforts to keep our patients satisfied with the care we have rendered.
3. When I started my career as a nurse, I used to have less responsibilities as I am just a novice in this profession. However, as the years pass by, my obligations have started to build up. I have become more aware of my actions in taking care of my patients, as much as possible I want my patient to be satisfied with the care I have given to them.
4. If I have the chance to pursue my dream to become a doctor, I won’t hesitate to grab that chance. I have been dreaming since I was a kid to become a doctor, probably a cardiologist, as I have started to work in the cardiac unit.
5. For me, there is no such thing as ideal job, as long as I am happy with my work and I can make other people happy, that’s the gist of it.
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Great answers. Here are some corrections
– supportive + of+ one another
– I used to have FEWER responsibilities as I WAS just a novice
– I have been dreaming of becoming a doctor since I was a kid
– as AN ideal job
thank you so much sir for such a wonderful feedback. it is one way for me to learn and to become more eager to achieve my target band scores.
Glad it helps!
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critically ill cardiac patientS and educate the patientS and their families
3. ………………. as I was just a novice in that profession
………. as the years PASSED by,
………… has stared/ started to build up
4. If I get a chance …………..
I appreciate your comments Shehla Gul, but I think you have to brush up on your grammar. Thank you
Enjoy your brushed up grammar.