1. In the kind of job I have, I am responsible for taking care of tasks that the elderly people need help with. These tasks may include preparing their meals, washing their clothes, and ordering groceries for them, to name a few. So, basically, I help them with activities of daily living. I am also entirely responsible of their safety and privacy.
2. I like my work a lot because I always have a whale of time talking to my patients’ stories. Working as a caregiver makes me in a very close contact with people.
3. At the beginning, I was dealing with only a few elderly patients and as the days went by, many more were added. The increase in the number came with bigger responsibilities. However, it made me more and more excited about the job rather than scared.
4. Yes, even though I said that I enjoy and I like this job, my eyes are still on my dream of working as a nurse. I graduated way back in 2011 and worked as a nurse in the Philippines for only a year. I came to Denmark in the year 2013 and studied public health. Still, I feel like I want to go back to nursing. So, I’m sure I will work as a nurse in the future.
5. If I think about an ideal job, it would be a job that I love so much. I would go to work without feeling it’s a job, but rather a lifestyle. I imagine working for 8 hours in 4 or 5 days a week and having amazing colleagues. The ideal job should leave for me sufficient time for family.
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Very nice answers Noemi,
I hope you get your ideal job in the UK!????
+ Lots of good discourse markers and vocabulary: “to name a few”, “basically”, “way back in 2011”
– Be careful with articles. We don’t usually put an article before nouns when we are talking about that group in general For example “that elderly people need help with” (not “the elderly”)
– “talking to my patients’ stories.” change to “hearing my patient’s stories”
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Thanks Eli.
“Talking to my patient’s stories” I think that’s a typo and my mind was maybe confused which verb to write. 🙂
– I will remember about the article “the” . It’s something I need to work on.
Thanks again.