I would like to try the outdoor sport is golfing. I watched people play golf on tv and they always wear nice golf outfits. Men wear shirts with collar and pants and women wear colorful shirts and skirts. And when they play golf their form is gracious and beautiful. I would like to try golf with that kind of shirts and short skirt. There are so many Korean golfers in PGA and LPGA and they play it really well. Specially women golfers are really good. Playing golf takes long time about 4-5 hours to play 18 holes. I think it is really nice play golf with my husband. In US there are so many golf courses and not too expensive unlike Korea. Our kids have all grown up so we can enjoy golf all day with our friends on weekends. And we can play golf with our kids if they learn golf too. We can go golf trips to others countries with my family and friends when we have vacations. If I want to play golf I need to take proper lessons from golf instructors. I am a slow learner and not athletic so I need to take more lessons than other people and need to practice a lot more. In Chicago the weather gets better in April so we can play golf in April to October and we can practice during winter. I think it’s good to have winter to take rest and practice golf for next year. We can enjoy golf we get older too. It’s nice to learn and play golf
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