I would like to tell you a kind of sport that I actually have wanted to try since I was a kid. It is marathon, which is basically another type of running in such a very long distance. I am really keen on trying on this particular running as I believe it can enhance my body metabolism and burn some calories as well. Plus, this sport is quite easy as it is basically running. We have got used to running in our lives, especially running from reality. That is why I will try to run in the real meaning of running as a sport activity, so I imagine someday I can run marathon in the big cities like Jakarta, London, or Kuala Lumpur. However, this imagination should stay as imagination because currently I have some problems with my respiration that I cannot manage my breath so well when doing sports. I hope I can recover someday, so that I will be able to try running marathon.
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