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The table chart illustrates the proportion of carbonated drinks consumption every day during a 7 day period in 2019 in the 4 nations of the UK.

Overall, Coca-Cola was the most popular drink except Scotland where Irn-Bru was the most popular. Additionally, total proportion of each country varied between 39 to 51%.

Looking first at England, 16% people completed the survey reported that they drank Coca-Cola. In the second place was Pepsi, which was followed by Fanta at 7%. The least popular were Sprite and Irn-Bru with 5%, and 4%, respectively. Besides that, 40% people stated that they drank fizzy drinks.

Turning to Scotland, 51% of Scottish respondents said that they drank fizzy drinks. Irn-Bru is the most popular drinks in Scotland at 23%. Next came Coca-Cola at 11%, whereas Pepsi was just ahead of Fanta with 7% and 6%, respectively. Only 4% of the Scottish people completed the survey said that they drank Sprite.

In Wales, 20% of people drank Coca-Cola. Pepsi came second with 8’, making it more popular than Irn-Bru and Sprite with 6%. The least popular was Fanta, which was only drunk by a quarter as many respondents as Coca-Cola.

Finally, 39% of Northern Irish respondents answered that they drank fizzy drinks. Coca-Cola was ranked first with 18%, while Sprite half as popular as Coca-Cola with 7%. In third place was Fanta with 6%, which was followed by Pepsi with 5%. The least popular drink was Irn-Bru with only 3%.

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  1. Admin April 23, 2021

    Very nice answer Yuri ????
    + Clear introduction
    + Clear overview
    + Clear structure (paragraphs divided by country)
    + Clear topic sentences
    + Lots of good linking words
    + Good comparisons of the data
    + All of the data seems to be covered- well done
    – Some parts are confusing: what does ‘ mean in this sentence: Pepsi came second with 8’ 
    – Some accuracy mistakes: 
    “while Sprite was half as popular as Coca-Cola with 7%.” (you forgot “was”)
    “Coca-Cola was the most popular drink except in Scotland” (you forgot “in”)
    “Additionally, the total proportion of each country varied between 39 to 51%” (you forgot “the”)
    If this feedback helped you, please take the time to give other members some feedback on their writing- they will definitely appreciate it ????

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