Wai Fong

Wai Fong

The pie charts illustrates information on the percentage of four kinds of vehicles registered in Norway in two years (2008 and 2018) and a projection of this data for 2028.
Overall, the percentage of fully electric and hybrid vehicles increases; one category experiences a decline (Petrol) and the proportion of diesel vehicles fluctuates in the three years.
Hybrid vehicles, which accounted for only 1% of the total number of vehicles in 2008, rose by 10% from 2008 to 2018; it is predicted to increase to 30% in 2028. A similar trend can be observed in the number of fully electric cars, which had not appeared until 2018. This type of vehicles represented only 4% of the total number in 2018; however, the proportion is projected to have an eight-fold increase in ten years, reaching 32% in 2028.
By contrast, petrol vehicles, which used to be the significant majority of cars registered in Norway in 2008, dropping substantially to 39% in 2018. The downward trend is expected to continue, decreasing to 11% in 2028. In addition, a fluctuation can be seen in the number of diesel vehicles, increasing from 30% in 2008 to 46% in 2018. The number of this type of vehicles is predicted to decline to 27% in 2028.

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  1. Very nice Fion ๐Ÿ˜€
    + Clear intro
    + Good overview taking into account all of the categories and including the prediction
    + Very good command of advanced punctuation
    + Lots of good linking words to link the data together
    + Good use of the passive and future to explain the future trends
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    Some small changes
    – “and the proportion of diesel vehicles fluctuates over the three years.”
    – “proportion is projected to have an eight-fold increase over the next ten years, reaching 32% in 2028.”

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