What do you like to do in your spare time?

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   Sona July 22, 2025

   quite honestly, last 3 month l don’t have enough time for my hobbies. but when l had spare time, l liked to go to Egyption dance club. l am really into egypt’s culture and history for the last 5 years. the other reason l like dancing so much is that it is good for body and mind.

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      English Pro Tips AI (Sammy) July 22, 2025

      Here is a corrected version of your answer: “Quite honestly, for the last 3 months, I haven’t had enough time for my hobbies. But when I had spare time, I liked to go to an Egyptian dance club. I’ve been really into Egypt’s culture and history for the last 5 years. Another reason I like dancing so much is that it’s good for both the body and mind.”

      Here are a couple of things you could improve:

      1. When talking about a period of time that has passed, like the last three months, use “haven’t had” instead of “don’t have”.
      2. There was a small spelling mistake: It’s “Egyptian”, not “Egyption”.
      3. Don’t forget your I’s should be in uppercase.

      Keep practicing!

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   Gabrielle July 24, 2025

   Well, my favorite thing to do in my free time is swimming. I go swimming at least twice a week and I’ve been rather obsessed with it for my intere life. One of the reasons I love swimming so much is because, since I remember I know how to swim, my dad thought my siblings and I, is how we like to spend time together, and I am able to exercise while I am having fun with my family.

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      English Pro Tips AI (Sammy) July 24, 2025

      Thanks for your answer. You’ve made your point very clear. However, there are a couple of mistakes that we need to correct:

      Your corrected answer could be: “Well, my favorite thing to do in my free time is swimming. I go swimming at least twice a week and I’ve been rather obsessed with it for my entire life. One of the reasons I love swimming so much is because I’ve known how to swim since I can remember. My dad taught my siblings and me. That’s how we like to spend time together, and it allows me to exercise while I’m having fun with my family.”

      Mistake 1: You wrote “my intere life”, but it should be “my entire life”.

      Mistake 2: Instead of saying “since I remember I know how to swim”, it would be clearer to phrase it like “I’ve known how to swim since I can remember”.

      Mistake 3: You wrote “my dad thought my siblings and I”, but the correct verb here is “taught”, not “thought”.

      Keep practicing!

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   Ahmed August 1, 2025

   Well, my favourite thing to do is to exercise at the gym. Actually, I’ve been exercising in the gym at least twice a week. I’m really obsessed with it for the last six months. The reason I like it so much is that it allows me to unwind with my mates while spending the majority of my time with friends and it is also fun and sociable because I made a lot of friends in the gym.

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      English Pro Tips AI (Sammy) August 1, 2025

      Thanks for your answer. Overall, it’s quite good. There are just a few issues that need to be resolved. Here is the corrected version:

      “Well, my favourite thing to do is to exercise at the gym. Actually, I’ve been exercising in the gym at least twice a week for the past six months. I’m really obsessed with it. The reason I like it so much is that it allows me to unwind and spend quality time with my friends. It’s also fun and sociable because I’ve made a lot of friends there.”

      Mistake 1: You used the preposition “for” where “in” was appropriate. The correct phrase is ‘for the past six months’, not ‘for the last six months’.
      Mistake 2: The phrase ‘while spending the majority of my time with friends’ seems a bit repetitive given that you’ve already mentioned unwinding with your mates. It’s better to consolidate and simplify this idea.
      Mistake 3: It’s better to use the past tense – ‘I’ve made’ instead of ‘I made’, when discussing something you have done over a period of time.

      Keep up the good work!

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   Yvonne August 5, 2025

   Well, my favourite activity in my leisure time is playing Mahjong. It allows me training my mind while gathering with friends. I learned it when I was young . To be honest, I am obsessed to play mahjong in my annual leave. I can play consecutive 10 hours with my friends for mahjong games .Although the drawback of mahjong games is neck stiff and low back pain, I still enjoying playing it to unwind after long office hour work.

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      English Pro Tips AI (Sammy) August 5, 2025

      Your answer is overall good with some minor mistakes. Here’s a corrected version:

      “Well, my favourite activity in my leisure time is playing Mahjong. It allows me to train my mind while gathering with friends. I learned it when I was young. To be honest, I’m obsessed with playing mahjong on my annual leave. I can play for a consecutive 10 hours playing mahjong with my friends. Although the drawback of mahjong is neck stiffness and lower back pain, I still enjoy playing it to unwind after a long day of work in the office.”.

      Here are the mistakes:
      1. “It allows me training my mind” should be “It allows me to train my mind.”
      2. “I am obsessed to play mahjong in my annual leave.” should be “I’m obsessed with playing mahjong on my annual leave.”
      3. “I still enjoying playing it to unwind after long office hour work.” should be “I still enjoy playing it to unwind after a long day of work in the office.”

      Keep practicing and you’ll continue to improve!