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The table below represents the data on percentages of people who consumed soft drinks daily In a week in four different nations in the UK in 2019.(England, Scotland, Wales, Northern Ireland)

Overall ,of the countries that bought beverages , Coca-Cola was by far the biggest brand whereas Irn-Bru became the least popular drink except Scotland.The figure for the total percentage of drinks fluctuated over the given week.

Looking into more details, the percentage of using Coca-Cola varied in four countries while the brand(Coca-Cola) took the lead in market in Wales( one-fifth of all) followed by Northern Ireland.The residents of England stood at the third place overtaking the citizens in Wales in terms of Coca-Cola preference. In contrast, the people in Northern Ireland, England and Wales paid less attention to buy Irn-Bru (3%-6%) with an exception of Scottish.(23%)

Another two brands in soft drinks namely Fanta and Sprite has been popular in the UK communities at less than 10% whereas total percentage for drinks made up figures between little under 40% and slightly over 50% . The highest total proportion reported in Scotland at 51%.while the lowest figures belonged to the Northern Ireland .

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  1. The table below represents the data on the percentage of people who consumed soft drinks daily over a week in four different nations in the UK (England, Scotland, Wales, Northern Ireland) in 2019.

    Overall, of the countries that bought beverages, Coca-Cola was by far the most popular brand, whereas Irn-Bru was the least popular drink. except for in Scotland. Of all of the countries in the sample, Scotland was the country where the most soft drinks were drunk.

    Looking into more detail, the percentage of respondents drinking Coca-Cola varied in the four countries. Coca-Cola took the lead in the Welsh market ( one-fifth of all) followed by Northern Ireland. The residents of England stood in third place overtaking the citizens in Wales in terms of Coca-Cola preference. In contrast, the people of Northern Ireland, England and Wales were less interested in buying Irn-Bru (3%-6%) with an exception of Scotland (where 23% of respondents reported to drinking it). The other two soft drink brands, namely Fanta and Sprite, were less popular in the UK communities at less than 10% in every country.

    The total percentage of people who drank soft drinks were between a little under 40% and slightly over 50%. The highest total proportion reported in Scotland was 51%, while the lowest figures belonged to Northern Ireland (only 39%).

      1. WOW! MY answer is lacking of punctuation marks in proper places and putting prepositions are incorrect. And I lost one key feature as well. I guess I need to pay a lot more attention to those weaker areas. Thanks Sir Eli!

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