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Nina Z

Teenagers always has lots of examenes at school. Teacher say is important because life after school is university. Lots more exams. I agree with teacher that say is good.

After leave school go to university and you will have do many many exams. And more difficult than school. IF practice at school then lots of practice for university exams. Makes it more easily to do.

But also complain because teenagers too tired too much homework. Too many exams is too much stress. They need a break. But still is help them but they don’t always know.

In conclusion, I believe too much exams still good because they have so many exams in the university so they need practice.

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  1. Hey Nina, this is far too short for an IELTS Task 2 essay. You also use “but” very often. Try using other linkers such “in contrast” “by contrast” “nevertheless”

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