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There is no doubt that teenagers need a lot of practice for future life and in my point of view, regular exams are a good way that young people to be prepared for life after leaving school. Therefore I agree with the statement that regular exams at secondary school as this will prepare them better for life after leaving school.
I will state my opinion and support it with the appropriate arguments.
The first, regular exams are significant for students to pay attention to the study, collect their all knowledge and use logical thinking during the exams, in my opinion, all these skills what I mention above help children will prepare for future life and it does not matter they go to university or go to work.
Secondly, everybody knows that exams always have stress and nervous and if teenagers have regular exams they will learn to escape difficult situations and don’t panic.it is noteworthy that exams and logical thinking help children find the right way and solved manageable tasks.
However, sometimes regular exams are very stressful for teenagers even though after that they earn skills it is particularly ordinary for them.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that regular exams are very helpful for children to earn the most important skills such as time management, logical thinking, mobilization what is essential for teenagers future life and profession owing to good skills are the golden keys for successful life.

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  1. Hey Tsitsia,
    This is a good essay. You have some good vocabulary: “no doubt”, “escape difficult situations”.
    Here are some tips for you
    1. You don’t need to say “I will state my opinion and support it with the appropriate arguments.”
    2. Teenagers and children are not the same. Only use synonyms when you are 100% sure that they are synonyms.
    3. Avoid one-sentence paragraphs.

  2. Good essay. I agree with James comments. Also, don’t copy words from the instructions. You wrote: “regular exams at secondary school as this will prepare them better for life after leaving school.”- this is straight from the question.

  3. I guess If you organised your essay a bit more, the outcome would be great . writing is a process.The more we create ideas,the more we are associated with the language. Actually writing is a matter of daily practice. Keep it up.

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