IELTS General Training Writing Task 1 model answer – formal letter requesting reduced working hours to study part-time, with examiner commentary on Task Achievement, Coherence, Lexical Resource, and Grammar

Examiner Comments

Useful Vocabulary

Large or important.

I am writing to ask whether it would be possible to reduce my working hours, as I have recently started a part-time course in counselling and it involves a significant time commitment.

Quite large in size, amount, or degree.

This course means I have to attend workshops at weekends, as well as complete a considerable amount of research during the week.

Happening often and repeatedly over time.

Furthermore, I also have to find time for written assignments on a regular basis.

Used to show that something happens because of what was said before.

As a result, I am finding this difficult to manage alongside my current working hours.

To make it possible for someone to do something.

I believe this would enable me to remain fully focused and productive during my working days.

To stay at the same level and not fall behind.

I believe this would enable me to remain fully focused and productive during my working days, while helping me to keep up with my course requirements.

Especially or more than usual in a specific situation.

I believe these skills would benefit my work, particularly when dealing with clients and managing workplace interactions more successfully.

Helpful and focused on improving a situation.

I have become more confident when dealing with dissatisfied clients, as I am more able to listen carefully and respond in a calm and constructive way.

Feeling thankful and appreciative for something.

I would be grateful if you would consider my request and would be happy to discuss this further.

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