When it comes to outdoor sport, i have never been really keen on it. Of course, I did it on some certain occasions, for instance, i went swimming a lot when i lived by the sea two years ago. Nevertheless, lately ive been dreaming about picking up a rock climbing as an outdoor sport as i recently saw its championship on YouTube and found it fascinating, – nevertheless it was quite scary looking at the sportsmen zigzagging fast on such height. I reckon that if i could pick up one place to try this sport, it would be some Alpine mountains as there aren’t far from the place where i currently live. What is more, some of my friends would defines appreciate the idea of rock climbing there, so it will be less stressful for me to try it as i wont be alone. For my understanding the process of learning is hard enough when we talk about rock-climbing. First of all, people who take part in sports should be motivated and should forget about laziness and only this two points seem hard for me. What is more, this kind of sport, as i have mentioned, is situated on high peaks and i will need to distract myself from my fear of height. Discipline is the third thing that need to be mentioned. Professional and even amateur rock climbers have a special trainings routine, doing races and need to forget about sleeping in for a lot as they need to wake up with the sunrise. What is more, im quite sure that trainer will ask me to follow a special diet and to be honest, im keen on junk food, so i think it will be not easy at all for me to try this sport. But on this occasion, i would go ruthless and achieve my goal. I think i need to give it a try.
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